User:Chelsea Isbister/Xwalacktun/Nataliamurillor Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chelsea Isbister


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chelsea%20Isbister/Xwalacktun?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template



Evaluate the drafted changes
First, I want to say it's really exciting to see the article you're creating. I feel like its a great way to open the conversation on how we urgently need more representation for indigenous artists. So far, the draft looks concise and informative, it really gives you a good idea of his work and even a peek into his life. Your resources look really good, as well as the subtitles you chose. I'm not sure if there's a reason behind it, but it could be a good idea to add his birthday. In addition to that, I was wondering if you're planning to add a picture of him and his work. I'm really looking forward to reading the final article.