User:Cheney17/sandbox

So far I have a basic understanding of Wikipedia and how to edit pages. I do not feel completely comfortable editing a page that I visit yet, as I am trying to find content that feels incomplete. I do like how this is the main focus for our class, I think it will help me to work on my research skills while learning a new talent.

After reviewing Bill Belichick's bio page on Wikipedia, I came across a few details that I would like to add. I think that this article was decent, I would rate it as a 7. It certainly lacked some information, but writing about one of the most uptight, hidden characters can be a challenge.

1) First and foremost, Bill had an incredibly strong relationship with his father, who gave Bill his passion for coaching. Steve Belichick coached football for the Navy for over 40 years. It was one of his greatest accomplishments, and even though he was not a member of the Navy, when he passed away in 2005 he was buried at the US Naval Academy. A place reserved only for special individuals who have provided a great service to their country, and fellow brothers in arms.

2) Bill Belichick and Nick Saban are very close friends, in fact they used to elope on secret vacations when they worked for opposing football teams in the NFL. This was only revealed years later, however their formers coaches said that had they known about it, the legendary coaches would have most likely been fired.

I think Wikipedia makes inserting citations very easy. The hard part is making sure that the source you select to use is appropriate and accurate.

Unfortunately, I was unable to enjoy yesterday because the Patriots chose to lose their second game in a row. Which caused me to get angry and forget about this assignment. Now as Belichick would say; "we're moving onto Miami."

For my final article I will be creating a page on communicating signs in major league baseball.