User:Chenry231/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Josh Kerr (runner)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I am a runner and have followed the career of Josh Kerr for a few years now.

Evaluate the article
This article is pretty informative and is structured well, but there are definitely a few grammatical errors or sections that could be re-written to make the article read way smoother. To start, the part where it claims Kerr "holds the world best time in the indoor 2 mile" should be changed to holds the world records in the indoor 2 mile", the world best time is a far more confusing term as it could just be referring to the current year. Next when it says "national collegiate record" in the intro that should be changed to a "collegiate record". Next, in the section that talks about Kerrs early life, there should either be more detail surrounding the section about getting a "negative" response from coaches, or it should be removed because there isn't a source that really supports that fully. On top of that, there is very little about Kerr outside of competition, for example, where he trains and details about his life outside of running. Finally, under the Personal Bests column, the personal bests outdoors that are slower than indoor marks should be removed, the only time there should be a bullet point with an indoor time should be if it is slower that the time he has run outdoors, otherwise it wouldn't be considered a Personal Record.