User:Cherharr503/Adam the atom

Adam the Atom
Adam the atom is a story following a proton as an atom commander who controlled hes atom through 4 stages of its life

In The Beginning
I started off as an atom of oxygen bouncing around free in the air, there were a lot of nitrogen atoms, in fact so many that it was starting to get annoying. they would always tell me of how fun it is to be free and fly around on your own. The weird thing was, they all had the same story, they kept telling me that they were stuck somewhere for such a long time and blah blah blah and so you should enjoy your time free because it wont always be like this. At first I was interested in the story, but after a while it was just plain annoying. Every single nitrogen atom kept telling me the same thing. One day I couldn't take it any longer, one oxygen atom started telling me about how he was once stuck in a human and got burned, he said he had to stay with these atoms of carbon for a long time. I started yelling at him at how pathetic he was, h have been near humans, in fact I even touched one and nothing happened to me. He still stood by his argument which I thought was pathetic at the time. OK then he said, if you think you know it all he said, go touch that pointed thing on the humans face. OK I said and I moved all of my electrons and neutrons to the pointed thing. When I got there I yelled out “see, nothings happening to me”, no sooner were those words out of my mouth when the atoms and particles around me started moving towards the pointer thing. I looked around and that's when I realized, I was moving too. The last thing I heard was that oxygen atom say, enjoy the ride, sucker.

The Human
I was moving through some weird tubes, they were pink and peach color, we reached a place where for some reason all of the other atoms could pass but we didn't. My electrons were avoiding the other electrons of oxygen, this made my atom hard to control. I lost control and the atom started making weird movements, next thing I knew, I had an atom of carbon beside me and another oxygen atom on the other side of the carbon. I didn't say anything but personally I found the carbon atom very attractive. We started moving down the pipes again, except this time we were moving down the same tubes again. I could tell from the same twists and turns in the pipes. Eventually we were outside, I started to move my atom up but then tries to move it down when I thought I got high enough, when I tried to move it down, it wouldn't move, the atom still continued moving up, I noticed that the carbon atom was doing all of the moving and the other oxygen was just taking it easy, so I decided to take it easy as well. I fell asleep and when I woke up I noticed that the particles around us were the exact same as us. There were a lot of them too. We were all moving around  and socializing, the carbon atom was very rude, he would never let us talk and when we did he would but into our conversations. We stayed op here for a little while.

The Plant
For some reason the carbon atom was going down. We went down all the way till we reached the earths surface, the carbon atom moved to a plant where he hung out at the surface for a little bit then the plant started sucking us in for some reason. When we were moving inside it looked like the tunnels inside the human except that they were green. We moved on to a place where for some reason the plant combined us with water and we became glucose. I was in this combination of oxygen and hydrogen, the hydrogen atoms were even more attractive than the carbon atoms. We continued moving through the plants green tunnels until we reached a spot where the plant started burning us. The last thing I felt was me being pulled away from the hydrogen atom that I was so close with.

Water!!!
I woke up and I was moving full speed towards the hydrogen atom that I was with in the glucose, those electrons always know how to help out a neutron like me. When I finally got together with the hydrogen atom I still couldn't shake the feeling that I was lacking something, as time went by it grew bigger and bigger. One day I talked to my electrons about this and surprisingly, they felt the same thing too. We passed another hydrogen atom and my electrons steered me to it. As soon as we joined with the hydrogen atom and became water all those feelings I had before about felling incomplete suddenly disappeared. I felt normal again. We fell to the ground and started falling below the earths surface. We were falling deeper and deeper, the deeper we got the more water atoms. When we finally stopped I we were in a whole group of water particles. we were moving very fast. we got to one point were there was a weird metal tube sticking out through the ceiling I came up to it because I wanted to investigate. The metal thing started to suck us in, we tried to fight the suction but we couldn't we eventually gave up and just let it suck us in. we were moving in a odd way now, I had never moved like this before. I am used to falling down but right now we were moving straight up. We were moving like this for quite some time, when the metal tube finally ended we were at some sort of propeller, I was forcing us into another tube, this one was quite smaller. Lucky it didn't last long and the we were out in the open again, we were all falling into buckets and cups and anything that could hold water. When we fell onto our bucket we could feel it moving away. We soon felt cups and hands going into the bucket and lifting us up, I was lifted by a pair of bony and small hands of a child, before he drank me I caught a gimps of his face, he was so happy, I have never seen anyone so happy before. Over all I think I lead a good life as an atom, I learned that I am not always right and that sometimes I just have to listen to what someone else says. I also learned that no matter what you are or where you are you always have a potential to do good.