User:Cherryblossom1072/Cross-cultural communication/CanyonMoon44 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Cherryblossom1072)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cherryblossom1072/Cross-cultural communication


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cross-cultural communication

Lead
The lead for this article is very concise. Cherryblossom1072 has not yet made any changes to the lead. I would suggest rewording the definition a bit, specifically the beginning of the sentence; "Cross-cultural communication is a field of study that looks at.." I would change the word "looks". The lead does not give any insight to what the article will discuss in its major sections. Adding a brief description of the articles main topics would be helpful.

Content / Tone / Sources / Organization

Cherryblossom1072 appears to not have made any edits in the sandbox. I agree with the disclaimer at the top of the article that the original does not give any information on a worldwide view of cross-cultural communication, and I think a section expanding on that would be useful. The article discusses how the origins of cross-cultural communication began during the Cold War. I would suggest doing more research to make sure that is accurate.

I also feel that the original article spends too much time on challenges in cross-language qualitative research. Based on the current lead of the article, I would not have expected the article to spend so much time on that topic. If Cherryblossom1072 chooses to leave that section in, I would recommend shortening it a bit and added it into the lead.

I like that the article talks about cross-cultural communication in college and the workplace. I would suggest elaborating more on that and maybe adding more instances of cross-cultural communication in everyday life.

Overall

Cherryblossom1072 should begin to make edits in the sandbox and find more sources for their article. As mentioned in the disclaimer, the article needs a lot of improvements. I would suggest reorganizing the structure of the article and expanding on the worldwide view of the topic.