User:CherylnVerlin/Vivian Qu/Just an archaeologist Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:CherylnVerlin/Vivian Qu
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Vivian Qu

Evaluate the drafted changes
General notes - You definitely have a ton of interesting content. I think there are a few areas that you have room to expand but I enjoyed what you have written!

Lead - Really well formatted! I like how much focus you put on the work she has been recognized for. Grabs the readers attention, good opening content.

Content - Lots of information provided in the body of your work. A few questions though, you focus a lot on her film Angels Wear White right off the bat in Life and Career, is there any information on her life leading up to the release of the film? I noticed a lot of information on the already existing page, I'm assuming the two articles will be incorporated in someway. I really like that you discuss her directing influences, and her work in gender equity. A lot of great information and I'm so excited to read about her more!

Tone - Great neutral tone, can't find any sort of bias.

Sources - I like that you have Chinese sources as well as english. All your sources seem up to date and cemented.

Really looking forward to the finished product!