User:Cheynehoke/Refugee health in the United States/Emmazeko Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cheynehoke


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cheynehoke/Refugee_health_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Refugee health in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
"As a result of the COVID-19 pandemic, a survey conducted in 2021 found that refugee communities primarily composed of African and Southeast Asian were suffering disproportionately from the effects of the pandemic. Specifically, 76% reported difficulty paying for food, housing and healthcare, 70% reported lost income, and 58% indicated concern about paying bills.": this section needs a citation

-"Refugee communities are generally composed of larger families living in crowded housing, low-paid front line workers in a variety of industries, limited English skills, poor access to and use of healthcare services, high degrees of financial and food insecurity, low rates of health insurance and high degrees of stress": I think this sentence could be reworded a bit, it starts by saying the composition of communities but then lists more general traits. Maybe could say something like "common characteristics of refugee communities are..."

-the other additions you made are well-written, neutral, and well-sourced