User:Cheynehoke/VOLAG/Emmazeko Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cheynehoke


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cheynehoke/VOLAG?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * VOLAG

Evaluate the drafted changes
-the addition you made to the first paragraph seems like an important one, I think this definitely adds to the article!

-"not adequate to to address"- wrote "to" twice

-there's a good number of sources

-All the sections are really well-written and read as neutral

I don't want to be unhelpful, but honestly this looks really good and I didn't see any other grammatical errors or sections that seem opinionated!