User:Cheynehoke/VOLAG/Natalieychu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

username: Cheynehoke


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * VOLAG sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Article Draft:


 * really strong leading statement that is concise, well-sourced, and easy to read through (especially enjoyed the VOLAG definition in the beginning)
 * great usage of sources that are relevant and benefit the overall writing

History:


 * the term "IndoChinese" in the existing article of this section may be outdated and could be updated to "Southeast Asia"
 * maybe include a hyperlink of the 'Cuban Refugees' if there is an existing article that could help with context and additional support
 * other agencies like the 'Department of Health, Education and Welfare' and 'Office of Refugee Resettlement' could also be hyperlinked for the same reasons as mentioned above

Funding Issues:


 * well-sourced section that maintains a neutral tone and is easy to read
 * 'U.S. Senate Committee on Foreign Relations' and 'Lutheran Immigration and Refugee Service' could be hyperlinked to an existing article or official website if possible
 * the quote at the end of this section is informative for the overall article!