User:Chh38430/Acinetobacter baylyi/Biochem51 Peer Review

General info
Chh38430
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chh38430/Acinetobacter_baylyi?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Acinetobacter baylyi
 * Acinetobacter baylyi

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

I think the draft notes provide a good introduction to A. baylyi. Historical context would provide a good background to the bacterium, along with an introduction to its general structure, pathology, etc. I would suggest adding a brief description of the article's sections.

Content

The content is prevelant to the subject.

Tone and Balance

Tone is objective. Writing and sentence structures are balanced.

Sources and References

A few sentences seem to be not cited—this is an easy fix.

Organization

The "Biology and Biochemistry" section maybe could be broken down into more specific sections. The "metabolism" and "culture cycle" are a good start. Maybe add a section about physical characteristics of the bacterium if there is any information available.

Images and Media

I would suggest adding a picture of the bacterium.