User:Chh38430/Acinetobacter baylyi/British Bird Boy Peer Review

General info
(Chh38430)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Chh38430/Acinetobacter baylyi
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Acinetobacter baylyi

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is in the early stages, and you started with very little material, so I will keep this pretty simple to start.

All the bibliography links work and link to high quality scientific literature.

I think the main thing you'll need to focus on is to work on the organization. I'm not a fan of the Asp abbreviation, as I think it would be helpful to include the full name to start, and then abbreviate from there. Adding a few more links would also be quite helpful to understanding the topic.