User:Chicagooo/Hot pot/新乡职业技术学院王哥 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Xiannvzah


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chicagooo/Hot_pot?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hot pot
 * Hot pot

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The Lead of the article haven't changed in Xiannvzah's draft.

Content

The content added to the article is about the Japan and Taiwan hotpot. In the article, there is some of the information about Japan and Taiwan hotpot. In the draft, there is extra of information being added to the sub-heading of Taiwan and Japan hotpot. For example, the types of the Japanese Hotpot

Tone and Balance

The content is relatively neutral. It just simply illustrate the different types of Japanese hotpot and the formation of the Taiwan hotpot.j

Sources and Reference

The sources are coming from relatively rely source, and all of the sources are reasonable and connected to the informations. The most of the sources are from recent years.

Organization

The different types of the hotpot are written carefully and easy for reader to read. Also, the information is well organized. All informations are placed on the sub-heading that belong to them

Image and Media