User:Chicagooo/Hot pot/F98321 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chicagooo, Xiannvzah


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Chicagooo/Hot pot
 * Link to the current version of the article
 * Hot pot

Evaluate the drafted changes
The authors focus on the history and the regions of hot pot. With detailed and easy-to-read sentences they describes the history of hot pot in China, over the past thousands of years. This helps improve the original passage, which includes little about hot pot's development track. They also menitons hot pot in other Asian countries with the neutral attitude. They employ many well-writen resources, which makes the article more credible.