User:Chicana2023/Adesina Cooper/Jesus9122 Peer Review

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Chicana2023
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This article does a good job of giving a straightforward biography of Adesina Cooper and states that she is a sculptor and artist. It even talks about how many years of experience she has in her field and how she developed her passion for it.It does a good job of mentioning her educational career and her accomplishments in obtaining two B.A.'s from Humboldt State University. She even highlights that her artistic focus revolves around family and community. There are numerous art pieces of hers mentioned, references, readings, and exhibitions. Overall, this article does a great job of presenting information about who the author is and her accomplishments. The only thing that could make this article stronger is if there was more information about her artworks and an explanation of what they represented.