User:Chicana2023/Adesina Cooper/Trinchicanwrit Peer Review

General info
Adesina Cooper
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chicana2023/Adesina_Cooper?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Could make your lead sentence just a little longer

- Maybe focus on fewer notable works and make the description of each two sentences.