User:ChicanxAni/Sofia Alexander/2wsdfr56yhnji90 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ChicanxAni


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ChicanxAni/Sofia_Alexander?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Article is written in neutral and unbiased language.

All citations are placed in the proper area and links work.

However, most of these sources are website blogs which are typically discouraged as reliable sources. Reading about this artist, I understand that these may be the only sources available, so this is more of a suggestion than a mistake.

I believe if you divide the Bio section into multiple subsections, it could flow a little better and be organized in a more appealing way. For example, the first paragraph could have a sub-heading that says "Early Life", the second paragraph could be "Onyx Equinox" and so on.

I think that the Resume section of this article is not needed.

Overall, this article is very well-written and I believe that by fixing a small amount of things, it will be ready to publish.