User:ChicanxAni/Sofia Alexander/Lenaa09 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ChicanxAni


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ChicanxAni/Sofia_Alexander?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall very good and informative article. It has lots of useful information pertaining to the artist as well as. However I think the information can be broken up into different sections, for example, background, selected works, accomplishments/career. There were also a few spelling and grammatical errors as well but nothing major.

The overall language is very good and remains neutral.