User:ChicanxAni/Sofia Alexander/Smolpenguin Peer Review

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ChicanxAni


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 * User:ChicanxAni/Sofia Alexander


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Main edits are fixing verb tenses. I'd suggest changing the word "also" some of the times you say it so it's less repetitive. I work in the entertainment industry, so I edited the section about pitching her shows. Overall, this was a great article and is personally interesting to me since Alexander works in television. I think the information is conveyed in a clear and concise way. I also love the mention of Lord of the Rings and Legend of Zelda