User:Chickentenderz/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Immunology.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because I am somewhat knowledgeable on this subject and it the first couple of paragraphs caught my eye.

Evaluate the article
The article began with a heavy lead sections. There are long sentences with overcomplicated terms. Content wise, different types of immunity were discussed; however, the major pathways were not placed in a convenient spot with emphasis, and the entire description was in text. Images and media should definitely be added for better reader understanding.

My overall impression is that this article needs some work. Most, if not all of the sources are from 2018 or earlier. The information can be updates with more recent information and Images would definitely help with comprehension.