User:ChimdiOsuji/African-American music/HSonti1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ChimdiOsuji


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ChimdiOsuji/African-American_music?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African-American music

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like you addition of Afrobeat to the article since it's such a relevant important genre of music to African-Americans. I think it would be good to give additional focus to other Afro-beat artists that you uncover in your research. Similarly on your discussion of K-Pop I think it would be useful to talk about some of the relevant artists, as well as some of the ways they appropriate and steal black culture in their music.