User:Chimericmacandcheese/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Akira (1988 film)
 * Article Evaluation
 * While there are good parts detailing the plot summary and cultural impact, there are other parts which seem lacking...
 * A few of the citations need to be revisited for less biased sources if possible, as a number of them take from less trustworthy sources
 * In addition to revised sources ther are also sections that are missing citations as well
 * For example, the second Home Media paragraph has no citations whatsoever
 * The article sources are relatively up-do-date and is covering even up to current Akira discussion today
 * The Lead section is fine, but needs facts rearranged for more consistency.
 * Perhaps move the sountrack detail in the second paragraph down to the third paragraph
 * There are some grammatical errors and sentence structure problems throughout, but the errors are small.
 * Only two images are present, both low-res
 * The cultural impact section needs revising for bias and a refreshing of higher quality citations.
 * The soundtrack section is concise but needs more citations and more detail.
 * Overall I can get a sense of Akira at a basal level, but the assertions need more backing up and fleshing out.
 * Overall I can get a sense of Akira at a basal level, but the assertions need more backing up and fleshing out.


 * Sources
 * https://www.comicsgrid.com/article/id/3527/
 * https://muse-jhu-edu.jpllnet.sfsu.edu/article/241295

Option 2

 * Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind (manga)
 * Article Evaluation
 * The Lead section confuses me in the second two paragraphs, where there is a blurb mentioning why Miyazaki created the manga and its influences and where it was published. It feels overly detailed where there should be more focus in the manga's plot and its cultural impact.
 * The images used are low res and there is an additional image of greek princess Nausicaa, which is unnecessary and should be replaced with a more related picture, perhaps of Nausicaa from the actual manga.
 * There may be an english speaker's bias, as I noted in the Talk page of the article.
 * Some citations opened either lead to barebones sources or were from lower quality information sites, but not many.
 * While the quality of this article as a whole is more polished, I would suggest the greatest edits for the Lead and Influences section.
 * While the quality of this article as a whole is more polished, I would suggest the greatest edits for the Lead and Influences section.


 * Sources
 * reference article: Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind (film)

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