User:Chimericmacandcheese/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Akira (1988 film)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I am a fan of the movie and have watched it a couple times. In addition, I wish to know more about the movie's development and impact.

Evaluate the article
While there are good parts detailing the plot summary and cultural impact, there are other parts which seem lacking...

* A few of the citations need to be revisited for less biased sources if possible, as a number of them take from less trustworthy sources

** In addition to revised sources ther are also sections that are missing citations as well

*** For example, the second Home Media paragraph has no citations whatsoever

* The article sources are relatively up-do-date and is covering even up to current Akira discussion today

* The Lead section is fine, but needs facts rearranged for more consistency.

** Perhaps move the sountrack detail in the second paragraph down to the third paragraph

* There are some grammatical errors and sentence structure problems throughout, but the errors are small.

* Only two images are present, both low-res

* The cultural impact section needs revising for bias and a refreshing of higher quality citations.

* The soundtrack section is concise but needs more citations and more detail.

Overall I can get a sense of Akira at a basal level, but the assertions need more backing up and fleshing out.