User:Chloe dela Cruz12345678910!/Sunset Scene/McCupcake31 Peer Review

General info
Chloe dela Cruz12345678910!
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chloe dela Cruz12345678910!/Sunset Scene
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chloe%20dela%20Cruz12345678910!/Sunset_Scene?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first sentence before "The Sunset Scene is a (135.3 x 59.1 x 3 cm)..." is unnecessary.

I fixed some of the grammatical errors in the first paragraph.

I am unsure if the section on Tiffany Studios is needed because I am sure Tiffany has their own page on Wikipedia already.