User:Chloe dela Cruz12345678910!/Sunset Scene/Quaquaversalll Peer Review

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Chloe dela Cruz12345678910!
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The introduction gives a solid base of background information about the pieces location and history. It doesn't necessarily set up the rest of the article, but we are in the middle of writing so that's something that can be easily fixed later. On a similar note (things that will be fixed after we've written more): it's hard to follow the current structure of the writing, and I think you'd benefit from some further organization. You'd also benefit from using more written sources, if you can find any, as the sources currently listed that are new are websites.

While the section on Tiffany Studios' background is interesting, it feels better suited for the greater wikipedia article on Tiffany Studios that you reference earlier in the text. The amount of quotes is also notable. While I'm unsure if the rule about quotations is a hard line, I do remember there being a lot of modules about how we should rephrase everything into our own words.