User:Chloponyart391/Mumuye people/1326mmb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chloponyart391


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Chloponyart391/Mumuye people - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mumuye people - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead includes various information revolving around the Mumuye community and all the information that is provided is concise. The lead does include an introductory sentence that introduces who the article is talking about throughout its entirety. The lead does include information that is not present in the article because it gives more insight into who the Mumuye people are and some more of the demographics regarding them.

There is not much content, but I can see that there are headings for where more content is going to be added, and for the content that has been included, it does relate to the topic of the article. The content is neutral, it generally describes the characteristics of the Mumuye sculptures. All underlined sentences are cited however, they are missing the pages that they were referenced from so just make sure to include the pages from where the information was taken from. Many of the sources are from the same author, but every resource is cited within the article and all the citations that are within the article work. These articles also are articles/books that are reliable, same with the information that is provided within them. The information that has been added is straight to the point and is easy to read. The information that was added also has no spelling or grammatical errors. The article is organized so that information that is soon to be added has a place to go and the information that is added is under the correct heading.