User:ChloroCatBench/N-Heterocyclic Olefins/Spqr mc Peer Review

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ChloroCatBench
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Evaluate the drafted changes
For the reactivity section, I think more structure diagrams (chemDraws) are needed in order to illustrate your main points better.

The sentence "However, examples of NHO ligands in main group metal chemistry are still limited." in your Metal Ligation paragraph is not needed, I think. It might be better if you could include what type of the ligand NHOs are, i.e., σ-donors, π-donors, or π-acceptors, x or L type.

Maybe include a figure about how the MgCl2 salt and the NHO coordinates to the reactants to illustrate the how the Lewis acid helps with polymerization.

Maybe put the paragraph "organcatalyst" under "CO2 sequestration" to make the connection in a logical way.

Other than that everything is pretty good!