User:Chodges8/Apathy/Samuel Raaflaub Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chodges8


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chodges8/Apathy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * apathy

Evaluate the drafted changes
There was minimal text added to the original article in the draft so I will be reviewing the article itself. The lead to the article was quite strong as it defined apathy and referenced many of the topics that would be covered later in the article. The text added to the first part of the lead added a bit more context to define apathy. The article seems relatively up to date with articles from within the last 5 years making contributions. There is some information that could be looked into such as a socioeconomic, racial, culture, or ethnic factors in relation to apathy. The tone of the article is neutral and represents many of the sections evenly. The sources are reliable, however there was one source that looked like it was cited twice in the references. The article is also organized well with all of the sections following a clear path from the lead to apathy in specific conditions.