User:Chodges8/Apathy/Sydanne7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chodges8


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chodges8/Apathy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Apathy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great edits so far!

When you say "Apathy can also be defined as a person's lack of goal directed activity compared to their previous state", I think it could be beneficial to maybe say "lack of goal orientation" instead of "goal directed activity".

You mention mortality and institutionalization for individuals with apathy. Maybe expound on this later in the article.

Overall, I like your edits! Good luck on your future edits :)