User:ChrisBranch1999/Frank Silas Doernbecher House/Jencool17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chris Branch


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ChrisBranch1999/Frank_Silas_Doernbecher_House?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really enjoyed the overall layout of your article, as it contributes to the flow of the information you provided. The lead was definitely general enough in the sense that you included the important dates, the function (or the eventual function), and some brief mention of the owner of the property. I also like how concise your sentences are because you were sharing a lot of information about the history of Frank Silas Doernbecher and I think you utilized the necessary information that would give the readers enough knowledge on the house. It also looks like you used some quality sources for your article, and by first glance, it adds to the credibility of the article to have sources coming straight from OHSU and the National Registrar of Historic Places because those documents are definitely going to have some really key information. I also appreciate the architectural section of your article, and this is totally optional, but if you wanted to add some external links to some architectural vocabulary that was used, that could be helpful to readers so they can understand what those terms mean for the house. Overall, I think you've done an awesome job on your draft!