User:Chrisad88/Twelfth Dynasty of Egypt/Tmitfc Peer Review

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Chrisad88
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Chrisad88/Twelfth Dynasty of Egypt
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:Chrisad88/Twelfth Dynasty of Egypt/Bibliography

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Leading section:

In Leading section, it give us the enough information about why there have less information of the Twelfth Dynasty of Egypt, and most of information only come out from the old records that left from the time. But I think still it can tell more about some short brief for the Twelfth Dynasty of Egypt, which can help us to know more about the story of this dynasty.

Clarity of Article Structure:

In Clarity of Article Structure, I think it give a clear chronicle that showing the each of Kings in the Twelfth Dynasty of Egypt. Only thing need to fix is that some of Kings did not have resource that show the evidences.

Coverage Balance:

In Coverage Balance, I think entire draft covered enough part about the both in Leading and Article. Only problem still is there need some more information about the resources that can show the evidences for.

Content Neutrality:

In Content Neutrality, I think it is Neutral in most of part, due to the enough link of resources, and the word also use the neutral way that did not show any of personal idea.

Sources:

In Sources, I think it is give us the enough sources about most of both Leading section and Article, only some part need more sources for some part.