User:Chriscui0823/sandbox

Here is where I take personal notes for everything I have done in Wikipedia.

Articles Editing History
Gray Baby Syndrome

Goals

Editing Notes
 * Improve the structure of the article
 * Find more secondary literatures to cite
 * Update information not accurate or controversy
 * Add new information

072721 - 1st small group session

072921 - 2nd small group session
 * Found references (secondary):
 * In the WHO Model Formulary for Children 2010, grey baby syndrome is listed under chloramphenicol as a rare adverse effect. It simply lists symptoms of the syndrome but has no other useful information such as pathophysiological explanations or therapeutics guidelines.
 * There is a review published on Mayo Clinic Proceedings briefly summarizing the adverse effects. Other than symptoms, there is a short description about dosing and risk age groups.
 * In the Drug and Lactation Database (LactMed), it states that "Milk concentrations are not sufficient to induce gray baby syndrome" since the syndrome is dose-related.


 * Tried to find more references but failed.
 * Scanned through what we have already in the article.
 * A bit confused on what to add and how to phrase.

073021 - 3rd small group session

080121 - extra small group session
 * Started editing officially.
 * Included what I have above in the article.
 * Updated the infobox.
 * Didn't know what to add more since I have added all I have.
 * Have added 4 references and ~2500 characters.
 * Added the MSD Manual as an entry recommending the proper use of the medication in neonates.
 * 2 references and ~2000 characters to go.

080221 - Editing during lecture
 * Read through each sections.
 * Re-discover materials in the citations and add more flesh to the article.
 * Found 1 more reference about the enzyme function development.
 * This review summarized the physiological development of hepatic function in neonates, which highly related to the possible toxicity of medications.

080321 - 4th small group session
 * Found last reference requested.
 * In this review, common therapeutic regimen of chloramphenicol is provided comparing to the toxicity cut-off.
 * Need more to be built on. Now hitting ~4000 characters.

080421 - 5th small group session
 * Took comments of peer review from another group.
 * Changed phrasing in different sections to be more accurate.
 * Added more links within Wikipedia for terms not well explained in the article.
 * Fixed minor grammar errors.


 * Fixed the formatting of references
 * Checked if references are from potential predatory publishers
 * beallslist.net
 * Prepared the final presentation

080521 - self editing


 * Final proof check before the presentation

Pudendal Nerve Entrapment

080221 - During lecture


 * Peer review assigned.

080321 - 4th small group session


 * Completed 3-question of peer review in the Talk page.

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