User:ChrisitanLowes/Evaluate an Article

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Comet_of_1577

Which article are you evaluating?
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Comet_of_1577

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Chose this because it seemed interesting this comet was viewable for quite some time around the world, and could use some work.

Evaluate the article
Section: Observations by Brahe and others


 * The Second paragraph references Johannes Kepler by stating his mother took him to view it. It could be improved by removing, or going into details of other early astronomers who witnessed the comet, and were influenced by it.


 * Throughout, the topic changes between observations by different astronomers and findings by Brahe. This could be improved by separating the observations and findings by making another section dedicated the the scientific findings after the observations.
 * Needs tidied up to fix multiple one sentence lines/ paragraphs.

Section: Contemporary References


 * This section has many direct quotes from books, and some that are poorly cited.