User:Christaaugustin/Ifi Amadiume/Lexdem2 Peer Review

General info
Christaaugustin
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Ifi Amadiume
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ifi Amadiume

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I think that you have done a nice job of updating Ifi Amadiume's page to better reflect her work. I like how you revised the lead to have more information about her and the number of works that she has produced. I think that you have added valuable content about her, pertaining to both her education and career. I think that this is a really good start, and there is the potential to make the article even better. I feel like this piece could benefit by some more sections, such as early life, education, career, etc. If you divided it up and added more to each section, it would be easier to understand. I also think that this article could benefit from an image of Amadiume, which would give readers an idea of who they are reading about. I like that you added all of her works, but I think that it would be good to add a little bit about the reception of these works. Overall, you added some really nice edits.