User:Christian.Moreno44/White power music/Taliafrankel Peer Review

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Christian.Moreno44
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 * User:Christian.Moreno44/White power music :
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * White power music

Evaluate the drafted changes
I see that a new edition to the article is discussing "pushing back on White power music." While it mentions Spotify, I think including other streaming platforms and specific examples of actions they are taking could be helpful. I also think taking this topic in a broader direction and maybe discussing social movements/public reactions to this type of music could be relevant.

I also think maybe discussing groups that are targeted by White supremacist music and giving specific examples could be helpful. This could also involve adding more history about this type of music, where it stemmed from, how its appeared historically, the effects of it, etc.

Christian: Thank you for your feedback I appreciate your points as they make it very helpful as to what others see in our piece. I will definitely look into the broader idea of White Power Music and how others react to this type of music and the specific groups these white power music groups are attacking and attempt to get the general reasoning why.