User:ChristianKoreanAmerican/Linguistic Injustice in Politics/Paigebodnar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

J2R, Linguistic Injustice in Politics


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ChristianKoreanAmerican/Linguistic Injustice in Politics


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
-lead is confusing and connection between linguistic injustice and politics is unclear

-introductory sentence should connect politics and linguistic injustice

-lead concise and introduces subsections

-content added relevant and up-to-date but not neutral

-confused about relation between modern politics and linguistic injustice(based on article), I believe article would benefit from an example of a modern day act of politically expressed linguistic injustice(explained well, however)

-content not entirely neutral

-sources used are reliable, but I think more relevant sources/topics should be presented

-diverse spectrum of authors

-all content is backed up with sources

-need more details in examples given

-meets notability requirements except for requirement 2: exhaustive list of sources