User:Christopher.horacek/Dynastes grantii/Sydmarks Peer Review

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Christopher


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Really good writing, the descriptive sections are very informative to the end sections with phylogenetic focus.

Really only grammatical and formatting errors so to help make things clear, I'm going to go by headings:

Dynastes grantii


 * "lives in Arizona, New Mexico, ... in Mexico" is choppy and a little confusing so "lives in Arizona, New Mexico, Utah, and Mexico" flows better
 * grayish-white should be hyphenated

Description


 * specify that the "apex of elytra to apex of thoracic horn" is how the body sizes are measured
 * grayish-white

Life Cycle


 * ensure spacing between citation and sentences is uniform in all sections
 * may need to spell out 2-4 months

Distribution and habitat


 * "Utah, Arizona, ... Northern Mexico" flows really well, can use similar sentence structure in first section
 * ASL? not sure what that means

Feeding Habits


 * either link cambium to another article or explain further

Similar species


 * ensure all scientific names are italicized and properly spaced
 * grayish-white

References


 * all seem to be appropriate sources except I am unable to open source number 2
 * ensure sources are properly cited, numbers 2, 3, and 4 are given red error messages