User:ChujieQiu0614/Gregorio Cortez/ZionMoore Peer Review

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Chujie Qiuo


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 * Gregorio Cortez

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead- The lead section of the article seems to be well developed already.

Content- The content is relevant to Gregorio Cortez even though it is primarily a biography written by someone else.

Tone and Balance- There is a lot of emphasis on this biographical book about Cortez rather than Cortez himself.

Sources and Organization- The main source is a book. Books are usually reliable, but it would be good to have other sources to back up your research. It could be other books or articles online. It just needs more to back it up. The organization seems to be going perfectly though.

Images- N/A

Overall- The book is a great source, but more sources to back up information would be super helpful. This draft is better suited for a wikipedia page about the book rather than Cortez himself unless you add more information that could be found outside of this book. Other than that, the draft was amazing.