User:Chunshengyan/Peptide vaccine/Abnerndabad Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chunshengyan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Chunshengyan/Peptide_vaccine&oldid=1056023385
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Peptide vaccine

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead could be more summary based on article and the statements on the earlier generation can be used to start a new section to make the article feel more organized and not suddenly starting the advantages and disadvantages of the technology. For the first section, I would start with the design of the peptide protein and brief description of the mechanism that allows them to be effective. Then, I would take about the advantages and disadvantages. This allows for better flowing article.

Overall: Great start, lots of content and well rounded, but organization could use a little work. References were good. There doesn't appear to be a bias in the tone and balance of the article is good. I like the diverse examples you listed for its application.