User:Chunshengyan/Peptide vaccine/Pin Chun Chen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chunshengyan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Peptide vaccine


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Lead:

The definition of pepetide vaccine is clear and easy to understand.

A part of the article talks about "Peptide vaccines through recombinant DNA technology". However, the importance of recombinant DNA technology toward peptide vaccine is not emphasized in the Overview section.

Some examples (or the links to the example) could be provided.


 * Overview:

Some transition phrases could be added between the two sentences "Conventional peptide vaccines are prepared through purification methods. Peptide vaccines are prepared through recombinant technology. "

Utilised-->utilized


 * Peptide vaccines through recombinant DNA technology:

The topic name could be revised as "Methods for ….", and a sentence "Peptide vaccines are prepared through recombinant DNA technology" could be added in the beginning.


 * Limitations:

A few sentences could be added in the beginning to summerize the following points.

The article mentions that peptide vaccines can also be utilized as therapeutic cancer vaccines. A paragraph for introducing could be interesting. Generally, the article gives a good review of the topic.