User:Chutcheon/E. Pauline Johnson/Tjones97 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) Chutcheon
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Chutcheon/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Kinda, at the bottom they explain their way to reformat (improve) this wiki page.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Somewhat
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Could be better

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? Yes
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? No sources linked
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? n/a
 * Are the sources current? n/a
 * Check a few links. Do they work? n/a

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? No
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? n/a
 * Are images well-captioned? n/a
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? n/a
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? n/a

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary info-boxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes
 * What are the strengths of the content added? They will be improving and will organize this wiki page better in my opinion.
 * How can the content added be improved? Add links, pictures and sources :) !

Overall evaluation
I think you have a great start and do good well of explaining the areas you are going to improve on! I think that if you remember to add some additional pictures, links and sources it will help other classmates who are reviewing your work to give you better feedback on how you are handling this! It's good that you rearranging the sections, one other way to better this page would be to try and add a whole new section that hasnt been discussed on the page yet :) Good luck Chutcheon!