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Article Evaluation

Social impact of YouTube Social impact of YouTube

I was distracted by some of the grammar at the beginning of the article. Although relevant, some of the information is a bit outdated and could use more recent examples. The article touches on most points I would have highlighted. Underdeveloped articles include "Expression of minorities and minority viewpoints" and "Advertising and Marketing".

Majority of the citations were from other Wikipedia articles. The article was nominated for deletion in 2013 but is actually listed as a high importance project.

Peer Review by Amanda Rice
I also saw some grammatical errors throughout the article. In addition, I felt like the content didn't back up the title. I suppose I was expecting the article to give examples on how YouTube affects people, communities, etc. The article gave examples of YouTube videos that brought light to hot topics (LGBTQ, depression, etc.), but I expected more. I anticipated to read how YouTube impacts us both good and bad. However, I with the information that was provided, I felt like it was neutral. I never felt persuaded to believe one thing over another. They did a good job with this.

Next, I clicked on some of the sources. A couple of them wouldn't even load, and others appeared to be from websites or news articles. Some of the publishers of the articles, I've never even heard of. And, like you said, they reference other Wikipedia articles.

I think this article could be something that's really informative. There are a lot of sources, and they can definitely use some cleaning up. Plus, finding reputable sources would help too. The article overall seems... messy? It doesn't flow well, so I'd also change that!

Article Additions
YouTube has been a large safety concern for parents and their children. The FTC launched an investigation. One of YouTube’s safety tactics is to push all child content to the kids-only channel, YouTube Kids. However, like it’s parent channel, YouTube Kids also faces moderation challenges. . Families that share devices face challenges