User:Cierracardenas/Food security/Isabellalunads Peer Review

Cierra's lead is concise and to the point, I wonder if maybe there could be a bit more explanation but it seems to work well. The lead is not overly detailed which is good. Some background about multinational corporations, what they are what they do is needed. The explanation behind how the West has been able to maintain its economic power is well done. Content added is relevant and very much so deals with addressing a topic of a historically underrepresented population. The tone is purposeful and informative. It does sway to one side, talking about status quo and such but this is vital in the conversation.