User:Cierracardenas/Food sovereignty/Isabellalunads Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Cierracardenas


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cierracardenas/Food sovereignty
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Food sovereignty
 * Food sovereignty

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is very well done, it lays out the writing topic and is clear and concise. Typo in first line of the second paragraph,. Space between- from.Food sovereignty has also. <At the end of second paragraph. Overall the tone is very informative, with lots of evidence to back up the lead, and it is more neutral. Content is up to date, and relevant.