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Article Evaluation
Article Evaluated: Plate Heat Exchanger
 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * The paragraph on its invention seems to be out of place as it is not well incorporated into the flow of the article. Otherwise, all sections are relevant to the article topic.
 * Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * The lead section has a line stating " the plate heat exchanger has made great impact..." without any sources to back it up. It seems more like an opinion than a factual statement.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * The article is fairly neutral.
 * Check a few citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * The first citation links to a company website from which a sentence is quoted word-for-word in the article. The other citations used work. Some of the external links do not work.
 * Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * The information used is sourced from scientific review articles and books. However, the external links provided link to manufacturer websites which could be biased.
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?
 * A section could be added on the uses of the plate heat exchanger in industrial applications such as food processing.
 * Check out the Talk page of the article. What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?
 * The talk page involves the discussion on what category the topic falls under with corrections on its mechanism and equations used.
 * How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?
 * The article is part of the WikiProject Chemical and Bio engineering (Rating: Start-class), WikiProject Engineering (Rating: Start-class) ,WikiProject Technology (Rating: C-class).
 * How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?
 * This article talks more about the design and optimization of the plate heat exchanger without mentioning its applications or limitations. Additionally, there is no mention of the use of positive pressure created to prevent contamination of the food product being processed.

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