User:Cindyjost132/Catfishing/Laneyfdz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Cindyjost132)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cindyjost132/Catfishing?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Catfishing- Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There was an addition of signs to look out for when communicating with people online that needed to be listed, and your correction helped with that. That added information is relevant and needed; good eye. There were necessary corrections on the Alicia Kozakiewicz, and it sounded better with those corrections. Changing the screen name to username was an excellent choice as it is a more common term on social media now. I suggest changing the wording of Kacie Woody's screen name to username as well. I would also suggest looking into some free copyright images for one of the young victims who suffered from catfishing. There is one image of the tv show host of the American documentary on Catfish, but there needs to be more text and separation. I see significant improvement in this article as you are trying to fix the tone of the article. Keep up the great work.