User:Cinnamoncardamom/Education policy/Cgpoppert Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cinnamoncardamom


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cinnamoncardamom/Education_policy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Education policy

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?
 * 2) I did not notice any contributions on the Sandbox page. Perhaps I am not looking in the right spot but I do not see anything to comment on. I did see that you included three sources on the bibliography.
 * 3) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?
 * 4) Since there isn't anything written, I cannot suggest anything that the author should apply to the article.
 * 5) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?
 * 6) By including their contributions on Sandbox the author could improve the article.
 * 7) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!