User:Cinnamoncardamom/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Kamala Khan (Marvel Cinematic Universe)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I am both interested in this Marvel character and am aware of the media associated with it as well. My first impression of the article was that it is an okay introduction to the character. However, the article can be improved with a better lead section and more images, for example.

Evaluate the article
The introductory sentence clearly introduces the character. However, the lead doesn't offer a brief introduction of the article's main points.

The content in the article is relevant and up-to-date. The rest of the article's content summarizes the show Ms. Marvel, where Kamala Khan first appears in the Marvel Cinematic Universe (MCU). The article has good organization and is written with a balanced tone.

One way the article's content can be improved is by giving information on how the character was implied to be a Marvel mutant (include information about the X-Men '97 theme playing in that scene, for example). Also, there is only one image in the article, located in the lead section.

The sources and links are relevant. However, it can be improved by adding more sources by South Asian (especially Pakistani) and Muslim authors for the "Reception" sub-heading.

Aside from reviewing a draft and formatting references for the article, there are no discussions that stand out.

Overall, the article gives a good summary of the character's appearance in Ms. Marvel, but can be improved with a better lead section, more images, and sources from diverse authors (especially Pakistani and/or Muslim).