User:Cinobunny/Larix laricina/Ty.olkkola Peer Review

General info
Cinobunny
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Cinobunny/Larix laricina
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Larix laricina

Lead
Your lead is strong and concise. I like that you included so many of the other common names for the tree, though I'm not sure that you needed to add the same citation for every different name - you can probably just cite it once at the end of the sentence. Otherwise, the lead looks good!

Content
The content you've included looks good and everything seems relevant. I think it was good to include the information on the Alaskan population. One thing I might mention is that it was difficult to compare some of the differences between your draft and the actual article since you posted the edits, which I'm not sure was required yet. But it looks good regardless!

Tone and Balance
You've done a really nice job of keeping your edits neutral and I couldn't see any issues with including opinions.

Sources and References
You definitely have included plenty of references, all of which look credible to me. I also liked that you linked lots of other articles when relevant, which adds quality to your article. I did notice that the last article you linked in the Damaging Agents section doesn't exist, so I would consider removing it.

Organization
Your organization is pretty solid, everything seems to be well laid out and in a logical order. You could maybe change the Associated Forest cover to a subheading for distribution and ecology since they are somewhat related topics.

Images and Media
I don't think there's much you need to do in terms of edits to the media of the article, but you could probably move the images out of the gallery and include them within the cones section if you plan on making edits to it.

Overall Impressions
Overall, it looks like you've put a lot of work into your edits and it looks really good so far. In case you haven't found this yet here's a link to a resource for formatting and editing species articles: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/a/ac/Editing_Wikipedia_articles_on_Species_%28Wiki_Ed%29.pdf I've used it a little and found it's been pretty helpful if I had questions. Nice work!