User:Cirwin18517/Hysteria/Selena AHIS320 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cirwin18517


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cirwin18517/Hysteria


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hysteria

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I would be interested to see you expand on the lasting effects of this topic on women's health today - perhaps adding a section about it?

Under the "Historical Treatment" section, I would suggest emphasizing how the treatments were given differently to men (outdoor exercise) vs women ("rest cure") that was mentioned in your source.

Also, this short film may be a good addition to go under "external links": https://www.nytimes.com/video/opinion/100000007026836/hysterical-girl.html

Overall, I think your edits are concise and great additions so far!