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I'm Angelina Cisneros. I am a college freshman that enjoys studying, going out, and tending to my plants. I'm excited to get my degree and start my career. Article Evaluation/Notes:

Overfishing is the removal of a species of fish from a body of water at a rate that the species cannot replenish in time, resulting in those species either becoming depleted or very underpopulated in that given area, overfishing has spread all over the globe and has been present for centuries.

The first sentence in the Overfishing article sounds too bias and negative, rather than keeping a wavered perspective. It sound be along the lines of "Overfishing is the mass harvesting of farm and open water fish that are unable to repopulate and sustain new life through the harvesting periods."

Under the Global Scale tab, the second sentence is copied word for word from its original article, even though it is cited at the end it is still plagiarism and needs to be fixed by changing the sentences structure or/and word composition.

The writer mentions the overfishing of pre-industrial times however, I'm not able to verify this because it seems to be only ISBN number and I haven't been able to find that book from that number, more research will be needed to verify this "fact".

The quote the writer used of Daniel Pauly is extensive and if I'm correct not per wiki allowance. Also If Pauly's idea that species that have disappeared and become extinct from overfishing will reappear... I don't know if I'd mention him as a reliable source only because we know once an animal becomes extinct they cannot be reintroduced or repopulated unless by some medical/scientific means.

First sentence of Examples, the sources is from 2006 and is outdated, more research with a more relevant source should be done.

Consequences section is outdated, and it's almost word to word to the source cited.

LOOK FOR OVERALL PLAGIARISM AND COPYING FROM SOURCE TEXT

Types needs new citation. Unreliable source.

Composition of Sources:

"Overfishing." National Geographic,https://www.nationalgeographic.com/environment/oceans/critical-issues-overfishing/ *

"Overfishing - Oceans (U.S National Park Service)" National Park Service, https://www.nps.gov/subjects/oceans/overfishing.htm *

"Overfishing of Inland Waters" https://academic.oup.com/bioscience/article/55/12/1041/407055 *